Saturday, April 4, 2009

Pedar

Apalah gunanya lagi melantun bicara
Bila ia sudah pun pedar
Dan tidak lagi empuk pada gegendang
Laksana keri menebas jantung
Adakah lalu akal ku
Mengusir fikiran yang semakin kikir
Dek kerana emosi yang semakin membidai
Betah ku sudah tidak bersisa lagi
Jejak ku sudah tidak bertapak lagi
Bicara ku sudah fakir kata-kata lagi
Mujur faham ku datang berbisik
Meletak kekeluargaan pada makna perhubungan
Dan aku diangkat menjadi sebahagian
Kerana itulah bicaranya pedar...

Nite Garden

16 comments:

MakPeah said...

Salam kenal...

Tulis sendiri ke..? MakPeah tak pandai laa...

Ceria selalu...

In The Nite Garden said...

Salam MakPeah,
Tulis suka2 jer..
Tima kasih sudi singgah..

DrSam said...

Bait-bait puisi yang indah.

In The Nite Garden said...

DrSam,
Terima kasih..
Pertama yg memuji..

Benrauf said...

pedar maksudnya apa ye?

Max J. Potter said...

seriously, i mean, seriously, i can't do poems to save my life. i can't comprehend poems, and i definitely can't write one. this one sounds nice..your own? wah~~

daSetan_7 said...

It's a nice piece of work. Congratz!!

Teman Dhuha :D

Ad Rifza said...

PEDAR tu apa ek?..Ad pun fakir kata-kata dah..hehe

taufik said...

i dah add ur name in my blog, and your qestion will be reply this coming thursday sebb nak cari bahan2 nye dulu . kang tersalah jawap atau copy paste terkena plak maki hamun orang. nice to you u ye kak. nak panggil apa erkkk????

In The Nite Garden said...

Benrauf:
Pedar ni sejenis rasa - rasa pahit kepedas-pedasan spt kulit limau.

In The Nite Garden said...

Max J. Potter:
TQ Nani. It's my own and it's for fun. Frankly, the inspiration comes most of the times when I'm on bed hehehehe so i keep a jotter and a pen beside my bed. But the most difficult part for me is editing a poem. Different people would comprehend a poem differently.

In The Nite Garden said...

daSetan_7:
Hmmm biasa2 jer ni sbb hanya tulih suka2 time tgh emo turmoil huahuahua

Thx anyway ;p

Teman Dhuha???? Ang kena tambah power specs tu lg daa.... ;p

In The Nite Garden said...

Ad Ridza:
Pedar tu pahit kepedas-pedasan dan rasanya mmg tidak disukai oleh lidah.

In The Nite Garden said...

Taufik:
Salam kenal. thx sudi singgah and adding me. Buat susah2 jer taufik cari bahan nak jwp soalan sya. Thx anyway.

Taufik bleh panggil sya KAK NITE - nama yg telah difofularkan oleh Benrauf. Credit to him hehehehe

D'Rimba said...

Wah wah wah pandai bermadah bicara indah kata-kata..........usahlah kau bermenung hiba mengenang nasib yang lara...........kau di sana...........kuseru kaujiwa kerana hati bergelora

In The Nite Garden said...

D'Rimba:
Nasib yg lara hanya boleh diubati oleh tujuh lautan.. Satu benua yg ingin ku jejaki suatu hari nnti agar dpt ku tinggalkan semua pedih dihati..

Terima kasih sudi singgah :)

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